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Listing audit · 🇺🇸 United States
Bottled: Message in a Bottle
Make friends, penpals and chat · Pierre Delannoy
Current altitude
0m
91/100Summit Ridgesummit 8,849 m
Top-tier listing. Defend it and keep shipping.
Land the top 3 fixes below and this listing reaches 100/100 · 8,849 m (Summit Ridge).
8,053 mRating
4.63
★★★★★★★★★★
Ratings
2.9K
all time
Last update
10 days ago
v2.15.7
Category
Social Networking
Free · in-app purchases
Your route up
The 3 fixes worth the most altitude
Ordered by how many points each one adds to the score. Start at the top.
- 1+5
Screenshots: fills the 10 screenshot slots
Improve5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Add 3 more. Each screenshot is a free ad panel: one benefit per panel, caption in large type.
- 2+3
Freshness: release notes say something
FixGeneric notes: “- Major performance improvements: smooth sailing ahead! - improved not…”
“Bug fixes and improvements” tells existing users nothing. Name what changed: it is free re-engagement copy shown in the Updates tab.
- 3+1
Description: easy to scan
Improve0 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Break the wall of text into short sections with bullets. People skim listings on a phone.
Keyword map
What Apple indexes, and what it ignores
On iOS, only the title, subtitle and hidden keyword field count for search. The description does not. Words you only mention there are invisible.
Indexedtitle + subtitle
6 unique words. Apple combines them, so “budget” and “planner” also rank for “budget planner”.
Invisibledescription only
Storefront
5 of 10 screenshot slots used
The first three do most of the selling: they appear directly in search results. Read them as a stranger would, in two seconds.
1 · in search
2 · in search
3 · in search
4
Review radar
Not enough written reviews yet
Apple returned fewer than five written reviews for this store. Try another country, or come back when more arrive.
On the same mountain
How the neighbours score
Apps Apple shows next to this one, run through the same audit.
Full checklist
All 20 checks
Title100⌄
- Uses the 30 characters28/30 characters used.Good
- Carries a keyword, not only a brandKeyword part: “Message in a Bottle”.Good
- No wasted wordsNo filler words.Good
Subtitle100⌄
- Has a subtitle“Make friends, penpals and chat”Good
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