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17TRACK Package Tracker
PacoteVicio - Track Packages23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Track Packages”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Track 2500+ carriers worldwide”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 99 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 127 characters.
2,829 characters.
Enough substance
1,146 characters.
0 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
15 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.82 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.94 average.
20,944 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
443 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 92 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 90 days ago.
Generic notes: “Optimized some functional experiences.”
Release notes say something
186 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
144 MB.
Reasonable download size
87 MB.