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17TRACK Package Tracker
Deliveries: a package tracker23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “a package tracker”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Track 2500+ carriers worldwide”
Has a subtitle
“Track your packages”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
19/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “packages”.
First paragraph is 99 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 275 characters.
2,829 characters.
Enough substance
1,734 characters.
0 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.82 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.64 average.
20,944 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
34,341 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 91 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 181 days ago.
Generic notes: “Optimized some functional experiences.”
Release notes say something
654 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
4 languages.
144 MB.
Reasonable download size
36 MB.