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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Theatro Manager’s App
SAP Build Work Zone Advanced21/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Business”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 615 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 420 characters.
615 characters.
Enough substance
925 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
1.64 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
1.94 average.
11 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
17 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 857 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 256 days ago.
233 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “BUG FIXES • Upgrade MDK to latest version”
3 languages.
Localised listing
38 languages.
12 MB.
Reasonable download size
439 MB.