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DeFacto - Clothing & Shopping
LC Waikiki Online Shopping29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Clothing & Shopping”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shopping”
Has a subtitle
“Shopping”
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “shopping”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “shopping”.
First paragraph is 56 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 34 characters.
3,854 characters.
Enough substance
1,142 characters.
10 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.48 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.60 average.
815 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4,761 ratings.
Last 22 written reviews average 2.5★.
Recent reviews are positive
Last 30 written reviews average 3.2★.
Last update 7 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
261 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
357 characters of release notes.
3 languages.
Localised listing
3 languages.
109 MB.
Reasonable download size
209 MB.