Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Designer City
City Island 5: Building SimCity Island 5: Building Sim
Build Your City On Your Island
13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Building Sim”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Build Your City On Your Island”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “city”, “island”.
First paragraph is 268 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 23 characters.
1,920 characters.
Enough substance
2,462 characters.
3 bullet lines, 18 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.85 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.66 average.
8,079 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
10,345 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 71 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 0 days ago.
266 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
11 languages.
Localised listing
22 languages.
223 MB.
Reasonable download size
338 MB.