Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
ThredUp: Online Thrift Store
Shop & Sell Secondhand Clothes
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Women's Fashion Resale”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Online Thrift Store”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Stuff you'll actually want.”
Has a subtitle
“Shop & Sell Secondhand Clothes”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 167 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 98 characters.
3,021 characters.
Enough substance
3,055 characters.
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.83 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.74 average.
65,147 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
305,172 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 0 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bugfixes and app improvements”
Release notes say something
71 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
75 MB.
Reasonable download size
196 MB.