Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Whip Around - DVIR
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Both fight for
No overlap. These two are not chasing the same searches.
18/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “DVIR”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Inspections, Fleet maintenance”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 295 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 246 characters.
3,115 characters.
Enough substance
246 characters.
9 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.73 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.14 average.
3,314 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
37 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 74 days ago.
205 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor bug fixes.”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
111 MB.
Reasonable download size
128 MB.