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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Shell Out
Scoreboard: Score Any Game9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Score Any Game”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Snooker Score Keeping App”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 93 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 19 characters.
733 characters.
Enough substance
855 characters.
1 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.79 average.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
29 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2090 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 45 days ago.
94 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor improvements and bug fixes.”
1 language.
Localised listing
29 languages.
5 MB.
Reasonable download size
11 MB.