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Tentacle Setup
Final Draft Go14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 18 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 14 characters.
287 characters.
Enough substance
3,211 characters.
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
23 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
3.67 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.98 average.
15 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,686 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 116 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 19 days ago.
229 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “• Minor bug fixes”
2 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
26 MB.
Reasonable download size
195 MB.