Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Logic Number Games”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Picture Cross Games”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
19/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “games”.
First paragraph is 36 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 38 characters.
2,684 characters.
Enough substance
2,237 characters.
26 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
16 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.83 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.74 average.
6,783 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
640 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 88 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 79 days ago.
Generic notes: “Adventurer's Guild and Dungeon expansions”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Performance and stability improvements”
15 languages.
Localised listing
18 languages.
27 MB.
Reasonable download size
16 MB.