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Find Truck Loads - Load Board6/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Load Board”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Easily find & book truck loads”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 300 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 318 characters.
1,281 characters.
Enough substance
1,829 characters.
11 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
22 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.65 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.91 average.
3,693 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
12,503 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 43 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 17 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Performance improvements & bug fixes.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
89 MB.
Reasonable download size
45 MB.