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PilotPal: Flight Planner EFB
MSFS MAP NG28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Flight Planner EFB”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 131 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 51 characters.
1,072 characters.
Enough substance
2,778 characters.
16 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
14 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.72 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.75 average.
664 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
12 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 138 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
107 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “1.Bug fix:Flight logging remains active in Main Menu mode. 2.change ti…”
1 language.
Localised listing
4 languages.
19 MB.
Reasonable download size
86 MB.