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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Mathem - Online grocery store
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It's time to quit the store
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Online grocery store”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“It's time to quit the store”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “store”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 73 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 27 characters.
822 characters.
Enough substance
976 characters.
7 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
1 iPad screenshots.
4.68 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
123 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 120 days ago.
324 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bugfixes.”
2 languages.
Localised listing
7 languages.
147 MB.
Reasonable download size
2 MB.