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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
ChargeStripe: Stripe Payments
Helcim: Point of SaleChargeStripe: Stripe Payments
POS & Credit Card Payments
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
21/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Stripe Payments”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Point of Sale”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“POS & Credit Card Payments”
Has a subtitle
“All-in-one POS system for SMBs”
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “payments”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 45 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 252 characters.
1,544 characters.
Enough substance
1,412 characters.
13 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.61 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.24 average.
2,084 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
113 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 19 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 33 days ago.
85 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “The latest version contains bug fixes and performance improvements.”
10 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
56 MB.
Reasonable download size
56 MB.