Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Garden Journal”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Track Plants w/ Notes & Photos”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 70 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 23 characters.
3,856 characters.
Enough substance
1,062 characters.
7 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.25 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.60 average.
272 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
15 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 442 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 57 days ago.
354 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
564 characters of release notes.
8 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
158 MB.
Reasonable download size
23 MB.