Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
朴朴超市-30分钟快送
淘宝闪购-点外卖更优惠Only 朴朴超市
Both fight for
No overlap. These two are not chasing the same searches.
Only 淘宝闪购
11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “30分钟快送”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “点外卖更优惠”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“开在家门口的生鲜配送超市”
Has a subtitle
“饿了么，外卖美食订餐买菜超市跑腿爆火好店”
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 25 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 10 characters.
221 characters.
Enough substance
552 characters.
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.74 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.81 average.
1,434 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
22,369 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 9 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 25 days ago.
Generic notes: “朴朴新版本更新啦～ 我们进行了多项细节体验提升，为您提供更好的使用体验”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “为了让您更好的体验饿了么与淘宝闪购，我们进行了一些产品更新，多项细节优化，希望为您提供更好的使用体验~”
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
182 MB.
Reasonable download size
214 MB.