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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
朴朴超市-30分钟快送
叮咚买菜——品质之爱11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “30分钟快送”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “—品质之爱”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“开在家门口的生鲜配送超市”
Has a subtitle
“Food & Drink”
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 25 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 106 characters.
221 characters.
Enough substance
523 characters.
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.74 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.56 average.
1,434 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
766 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 9 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
Generic notes: “朴朴新版本更新啦～ 我们进行了多项细节体验提升，为您提供更好的使用体验”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “优化改进多处细节，持续提升用户体验！”
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
182 MB.
Reasonable download size
189 MB.