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Change.org: Petition Manager
Your cause. Real change.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Petition Manager”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Activism Made Social”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Your cause. Real change.”
Has a subtitle
“Social Networking”
24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “change”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “social”.
First paragraph is 144 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 256 characters.
1,262 characters.
Enough substance
256 characters.
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
2 iPad screenshots.
4.69 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
121 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
10 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 14 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 14 days ago.
241 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
84 characters of release notes.
0 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
73 MB.
Reasonable download size
47 MB.