Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Gun Shooting games”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Online Gun FPS”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Offline Shooter, Sniper, War”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 144 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 320 characters.
3,427 characters.
Enough substance
2,566 characters.
12 bullet lines, 24 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.64 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.60 average.
37,285 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
38,844 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 387 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 11 days ago.
Generic notes: “minor bug fixes”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and optimisation”
8 languages.
Localised listing
27 languages.
926 MB.
Reasonable download size
1127 MB.