Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
DEAD TARGET: FPS Zombie Games
Sniper Gun Shooting Offline 3D
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Zombie Killer”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “FPS Zombie Games”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Zombie apocalypse FPS shooter”
Has a subtitle
“Sniper Gun Shooting Offline 3D”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “zombie”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 294 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 30 characters.
2,562 characters.
Enough substance
3,088 characters.
9 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
16 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.75 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.65 average.
114,121 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
50,512 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 9 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “Performance improvements and bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
135 characters of release notes.
21 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
1964 MB.
Reasonable download size
609 MB.