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Whiteboard: just draw together
Simple Whiteboard by QrayonWhiteboard: just draw together
simple, easy, focused and fun
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “just draw together”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“simple, easy, focused and fun”
Has a subtitle
“A whiteboard that just works”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “whiteboard”.
First paragraph is 95 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 20 characters.
2,501 characters.
Enough substance
191 characters.
23 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
1 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.52 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.56 average.
87,645 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
11,991 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 58 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 8 days ago.
1620 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “+ Performance improvements”
7 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
28 MB.
Reasonable download size
5 MB.