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Namshi - Online Fashion Store27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Online Fashion Store”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
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First paragraph is 95 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 266 characters.
3,996 characters.
Enough substance
631 characters.
18 bullet lines, 19 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.56 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.50 average.
51,770 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
120,616 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 29 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
189 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixes & Improvements: Bug fixes and UI enhancements for a better, smoo…”
2 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
176 MB.
Reasonable download size
98 MB.