Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Party in My Dorm: Campus Life
Life Choices: Life SimulatorLife Choices: Life Simulator
Life simulation! Hell & Heaven
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Campus Life”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Life Simulator”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Life simulation! Hell & Heaven”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “life”.
First paragraph is 350 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 309 characters.
1,979 characters.
Enough substance
3,991 characters.
0 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
15 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.47 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.55 average.
26,299 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
14,231 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 617 days ago.
121 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements.”
1 language.
Localised listing
19 languages.
856 MB.
Reasonable download size
244 MB.