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Toybox: 3D Print your own toys
smART sketcher projector30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “3D Print your own toys”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 81 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 212 characters.
601 characters.
Enough substance
3,490 characters.
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.54 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.26 average.
2,644 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
403 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 23 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 128 days ago.
Generic notes: “We have made various bug fixes and improvements to make your printing …”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and stability improvements.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
105 MB.
Reasonable download size
45 MB.