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Toybox: 3D Print your own toys
Common Sense Media30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
18/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “3D Print your own toys”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Movie & TV reviews for parents”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 81 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 266 characters.
601 characters.
Enough substance
1,519 characters.
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.54 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.80 average.
2,644 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
8,810 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 23 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 15 days ago.
Generic notes: “We have made various bug fixes and improvements to make your printing …”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “A fresh batch of bug fixes served up for the fall season.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
105 MB.
Reasonable download size
84 MB.