Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Zero: Fasting & Food Tracker
Intermittent Fasting Tracker:Intermittent Fasting Tracker:
Simple 16:8 Fast Timer
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Fasting & Food Tracker”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Simple 16:8 Fast Timer”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 316 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 65 characters.
3,214 characters.
Enough substance
1,857 characters.
9 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.82 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.87 average.
445,290 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
51,372 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 8 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 10 days ago.
949 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Added support for iOS 27. - Refined the app icon, thanks to Mark J. …”
1 language.
Localised listing
43 languages.
238 MB.
Reasonable download size
109 MB.