Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Dispatch: Deliver More
GoShare: Drive, Deliver, Earn22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Deliver More”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Drive, Deliver, Earn”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Business”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 90 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 167 characters.
901 characters.
Enough substance
3,059 characters.
5 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.68 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.67 average.
2,466 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
14,369 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 18 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 3 days ago.
Generic notes: “Performance improvements”
Release notes say something
218 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
75 MB.
Reasonable download size
62 MB.