Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
MoraBanc
Jameel Business8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
15/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Finance”
Has a subtitle
“Abdul Latif Jameel Finance”
7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “jameel”.
First paragraph is 152 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 595 characters.
3,321 characters.
Enough substance
697 characters.
36 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.56 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
27 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
5 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 10 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 150 days ago.
222 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “System Enhancement”
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
192 MB.
Reasonable download size
32 MB.