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OnePageCRM - Simple CRM System
CRM for those who take action
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Your Client Book, CRM”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Simple CRM System”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Manage Your Customer Database”
Has a subtitle
“CRM for those who take action”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “crm”.
First paragraph is 116 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 228 characters.
1,138 characters.
Enough substance
1,712 characters.
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.55 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.77 average.
413 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
377 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 76 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 8 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
Release notes say something
256 characters of release notes.
10 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
52 MB.
Reasonable download size
76 MB.