Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Online Fashion Store”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Luxury Fashion Online Shopping”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “luxury”, “shopping”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 187 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 189 characters.
1,637 characters.
Enough substance
1,275 characters.
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.64 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.61 average.
24,013 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
7,401 ratings.
Last 40 written reviews average 3.1★.
Recent reviews are positive
Last 40 written reviews average 1.9★.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 9 days ago.
129 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
364 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
112 MB.
Reasonable download size
145 MB.