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Ounass Luxury Shopping اُناس
Luxury Fashion Online Shopping
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Online Fashion Store”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Luxury Fashion Online Shopping”
Has a subtitle
“Think Fashion, Get it Fast”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “luxury”, “shopping”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “fashion”.
First paragraph is 187 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 266 characters.
1,637 characters.
Enough substance
631 characters.
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.64 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.50 average.
24,013 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
120,616 ratings.
Last 40 written reviews average 3.1★.
Recent reviews are positive
Last 40 written reviews average 3.3★.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
129 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixes & Improvements: Bug fixes and UI enhancements for a better, smoo…”
2 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
112 MB.
Reasonable download size
98 MB.