Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
小黑盒 - 八千万游戏玩家社区
大麦 - 电影、演出、体育购票平台Only 小黑盒
Both fight for
No overlap. These two are not chasing the same searches.
Only 大麦
15/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “八千万游戏玩家社区”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “电影、演出、体育购票平台”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Entertainment”
Has a subtitle
“买票上大麦，演出、电影、景点、赛事、脱口秀尽在大麦App”
13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 111 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 72 characters.
612 characters.
Enough substance
456 characters.
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.51 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.31 average.
1,311 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
435 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 9 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
Generic notes: “1. 修复已知问题”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “优化视频播放体验，看现场视频更流畅”
0 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
211 MB.
Reasonable download size
223 MB.