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Focus To-Do: Focus Timer&Tasks
Pomodoro timer for work&study
22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Focus Timer”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Do: Focus Timer&Tasks”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Improve your productivity”
Has a subtitle
“Pomodoro timer for work&study”
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “timer”.
First paragraph is 30 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 144 characters.
811 characters.
Enough substance
3,231 characters.
16 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.74 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.80 average.
10,825 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
14,639 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 36 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 11 days ago.
Generic notes: “fix minor issue”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug Fix”
3 languages.
Localised listing
33 languages.
106 MB.
Reasonable download size
100 MB.