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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Superlocal: Explore Places Map
Renz - Make New Friends30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Explore Places Map”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Make New Friends”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “new”.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
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First paragraph is 53 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 345 characters.
2,449 characters.
Enough substance
3,926 characters.
22 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.21 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.67 average.
3,095 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
24,175 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 80 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 295 days ago.
Generic notes: “bug fixes around Fog of World background clearing”
Release notes say something
176 characters of release notes.
3 languages.
Localised listing
6 languages.
284 MB.
Reasonable download size
177 MB.