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Melodista Music Offline Player
Offline Music Player ‣‣Melodista Music Offline Player
Music Player without Internet
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Music Player without Internet”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “music”, “player”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 45 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 89 characters.
1,706 characters.
Enough substance
2,002 characters.
12 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
14 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
2 iPad screenshots.
4.55 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.44 average.
39,271 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
57,641 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 637 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 25 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor Design changes and bug fixes Fixed an issue which prevented fro…”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Performance improvement”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
61 MB.
Reasonable download size
121 MB.