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Melodista Music Offline Player
VOX – MP3 & FLAC Music Player30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “MP3 & FLAC Music Player”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 45 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 60 characters.
1,706 characters.
Enough substance
3,035 characters.
12 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
28 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.55 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.19 average.
39,271 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3,154 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 638 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor Design changes and bug fixes Fixed an issue which prevented fro…”
Release notes say something
66 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
6 languages.
61 MB.
Reasonable download size
205 MB.