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The Official MTA App
RealTime-CTMS20/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “CTMS”.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“MTA transit and map info”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “mta”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 216 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 74 characters.
918 characters.
Enough substance
1,175 characters.
5 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
4 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
2 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.37 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.47 average.
12,587 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
15 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 8 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor bug fixes & improvements.”
Release notes say something
491 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
133 MB.
Reasonable download size
73 MB.