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TC Mobile - Tablet Command16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Tablet Command”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Productivity”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 132 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 96 characters.
549 characters.
Enough substance
1,117 characters.
9 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
1 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
2.82 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.81 average.
843 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
48 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 22 days ago.
Generic notes: “General improvements and fixes”
Release notes say something
86 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
226 MB.
Reasonable download size
199 MB.