Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Childrensalon
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Firstcry Retail DWC LLC
Only Childrensalon
Both fight for
No overlap. These two are not chasing the same searches.
13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 78 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 98 characters.
1,098 characters.
Enough substance
3,998 characters.
6 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.56 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.67 average.
319 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3,156 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 25 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 22 days ago.
Generic notes: “New features and improvements to enrich your experience.”
Release notes say something
430 characters of release notes.
3 languages.
Localised listing
3 languages.
230 MB.
Reasonable download size
178 MB.