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Downpour - Tumble Dumble
Tumblupon24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Tumble Dumble”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“A third party Tumblr client”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 238 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 56 characters.
396 characters.
Enough substance
202 characters.
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
3.83 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.25 average.
6 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 871 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 68 days ago.
Generic notes: “• Added a Like animation”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
19 MB.
Reasonable download size
12 MB.