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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Veggie Garden Planner
Planter: Garden Planner21/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Garden Planner”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Vegetable Patch Planning Aid”
Has a subtitle
“Plan and manage your garden”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “garden”.
First paragraph is 134 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 78 characters.
1,117 characters.
Enough substance
458 characters.
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.28 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.70 average.
3,875 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,346 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 692 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 36 days ago.
86 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
683 characters of release notes.
4 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
19 MB.
Reasonable download size
125 MB.