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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Stickmen Falling
Temple Run16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Stunning stickmen physic game”
Has a subtitle
“The original endless runner”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “stickmen”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 170 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 39 characters.
614 characters.
Enough substance
1,037 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.65 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.42 average.
9,762 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
418,684 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 122 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 10 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fixed bugs game”
Release notes say something
363 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
14 languages.
119 MB.
Reasonable download size
373 MB.