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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
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Ding Top-up: Mobile RechargeDing Top-up: Mobile Recharge
Safe, fast, easy mobile top-up
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Keywords in title + subtitle
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8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “up: Mobile Recharge”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Business”
Has a subtitle
“Safe, fast, easy mobile top-up”
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “mobile”, “top”.
First paragraph is 133 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 405 characters.
528 characters.
Enough substance
3,419 characters.
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.82 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
83,816 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 129 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 10 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fixes and performance improvements.”
Release notes say something
130 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
8 languages.
23 MB.
Reasonable download size
102 MB.