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Shopping Del Rey11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shopping”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 64 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 37 characters.
504 characters.
Enough substance
1,062 characters.
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.00 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 239 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 3 days ago.
Generic notes: “Mudança da logo e melhorias nas funcionalidades do app.”
Release notes say something
225 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
45 MB.
Reasonable download size
148 MB.