Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Army Games RTS”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 148 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 308 characters.
976 characters.
Enough substance
1,957 characters.
11 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.61 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.73 average.
3,729 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3,441 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 437 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 272 days ago.
412 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “minor bug fixes”
3 languages.
Localised listing
7 languages.
148 MB.
Reasonable download size
188 MB.