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Herodom
Medieval Games: Empire Battle7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Empire Battle”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“A hero comes along..”
Has a subtitle
“Castle Battle War”
20/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “battle”.
First paragraph is 148 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 87 characters.
976 characters.
Enough substance
2,296 characters.
11 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.61 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.76 average.
3,729 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
817 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 437 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 153 days ago.
412 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “fixed a bug causing gems to go missing for some people.”
3 languages.
Localised listing
7 languages.
148 MB.
Reasonable download size
324 MB.