Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Designer City 2
City Island 5: Building SimCity Island 5: Building Sim
Build Your City On Your Island
15/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Building Sim”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“City building game”
Has a subtitle
“Build Your City On Your Island”
18/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “city”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “city”, “island”.
First paragraph is 62 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 23 characters.
1,839 characters.
Enough substance
2,462 characters.
0 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.86 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.66 average.
4,137 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
10,345 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 52 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 0 days ago.
206 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
11 languages.
Localised listing
22 languages.
187 MB.
Reasonable download size
338 MB.