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Epsy: Seizure Log for Epilepsy
Seizure, Epilepsy, Medications
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “My Medic Watch”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Seizure Log for Epilepsy”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Seizure, Epilepsy, Medications”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “seizure”, “epilepsy”.
First paragraph is 322 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 309 characters.
3,660 characters.
Enough substance
3,953 characters.
10 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 27 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
iPhone only, nothing to add.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
2.41 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.68 average.
22 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,669 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 10 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 199 days ago.
Generic notes: “- User interface improvements - Performance enhancements”
Release notes say something
265 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
47 MB.
Reasonable download size
118 MB.