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Epipal: Seizure Alerts & Log
Detect Seizures. Alert Family.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “My Medic Watch”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Seizure Alerts & Log”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Automatic Seizure Detection”
Has a subtitle
“Detect Seizures. Alert Family.”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “seizure”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “seizures”, “alert”.
First paragraph is 322 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 217 characters.
3,660 characters.
Enough substance
3,212 characters.
10 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
iPhone only, nothing to add.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
2.41 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.37 average.
22 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
142 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 10 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 111 days ago.
Generic notes: “- User interface improvements - Performance enhancements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor improvements and bug fixes.”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
47 MB.
Reasonable download size
85 MB.